Jeremiah Davis Poet Free verse

Only When I See You

Only when I see you
Never in my life did I think I'd find God’s most beautiful creation
I had never forgotten so quickly that hate is just a piece of imagination
It's only when I see you my heart becomes a roller coaster It's only when I see you I feel my feet get colder
Love is a pint of what I use to describe how I feel about you
You're an eclipse that's blocking my aggression You're a noiseless butterfly that I feel needs my protection
Only when I see you
The stars twinkle are worthless
The birds morning song are soundless
The serene forest meant for a peace of mind are useless
You're elegance tip-toes across my heart You're beauty startles my eyes
Your angelic voice sang to my ears
Your presence as a whole is a comfort to my fears
Only when I see you

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Skat A June 25, 2015 at 11:11 PM Hi Jeremiah, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A June 25, 2015 at 10:51 PM Jeremiah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@