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Its been a long time since we've seen each others' smile.. Its been forever since we ran away from it all... An escape from life where we can drive for miles... A quiet place where we can hide and pull down the shades.. Sit under a tree and talk awhile as we watch the water cascade.. Read to you as your eyes close and you're in my world again.. Holding your head on my chest as we remember where we began.. No cares in the world as I tell you stories of a misspent youth... Your eyes open to certain parts as you know which parts are true... Shoulder and foot rubs till the sun starts to set, two hearts haven't changed from the first day we met.. The sun rays shine through the trees and outline your vision to me.. It won't be this long again I'm sure for this getaway was meant to be.. for W.

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Date: 5/22/2010 11:59:00 AM
this one my favorite so far today. REally nice, and a fav for you as well, Michael!!
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:51:00 AM
One can see flash of beauty everywhere in your poem. Great write my friend. And many thanks for your precious comments on my Poem Patradoot 10. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.....Michael J Falotico
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:04:00 PM
beautiful and loving write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:25:00 PM
sounds so dreamy!! I am falling again...
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:13:00 PM
Excellent, thank you 4 sharing,,SKAT
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:07:00 PM
i love this piece wow! keep sharing pleas
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