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Only Two Rode Home

Three Aussie cowboys set out one morn With old rugged faces weatherworn As they made their way through the Outback A croc sat watch, prepared to attack When riders neared his nest by the stream Two cowboys could hear the third one scream No Crocodile Dundee came to help As seasoned old Sam let out a yelp The croc had pulled him off his horse Sam quickly became the croc’s main course The cowboys’ guns fired to no avail For all they saw was a bit of tail Sinking deep into flowing water The croc had led old Sam to slaughter Two Aussie cowboys returned that day Crossing the stream, to tears they gave way Old Sam had rode with them for many years Before falling to their greatest fears Sam’s horse they led back to their home Through the Outback they’d not again roam *Written for Tracie’s “A Little Bit of Aus…” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 12:46:00 PM
Poor old Sam! Love this scary piece, my friend
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Date: 2/20/2012 4:15:00 PM
Danger in the outback! This should do well in the contest. It reminds me of a movie Rebecca watched on the computer while she was here...Crocks eating everyone...now that is scary! I might not be afraid of Alligators because I know what they sound like...but crocks...I'm not so brave there. Afraid to be their dinner. "Through the Outback they’d not again roam" Good decision!
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:55:00 PM
What a great story! It's so creative. I love it Blessings. Rhonda
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:41:00 PM
WAY to do this challenge,CArolyn. I just wrote a simple tanka describing the scene but it's cool how you developed a real story to go with that picture. You stand a good chance to win the cool contest that way. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:37:00 PM
What a great vision for this picture! I love how you went about painting the picture of what happened before whats in the picture! Awesome ideas! Great Work!!
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