Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Only Twenty-Three

Believe or not I'm really only twenty-three
Look old for my age, had a rough life you see
But in spite of my trials
Really have no rivals
Stunning and admired, can't believe my esprit

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Tom Cunningham May 2, 2018 at 12:20 PM Happy jack is only twenty three/he fooled you all, including me/he eats hot chillies' /chases young fillies/ he's a poetry soup celebrity/ Jack Ellison May 2, 2018 at 1:27 PM Had you all fooled eh!!!!! Your Poetry Soup celeb wishing you a great day!!!

Caren Krutsinger May 2, 2018 at 8:18 AM I love that; when I ask a child their age and they say "8," I always say "I'm 8 too!" this confuses them until they get to know me. Jack Ellison May 2, 2018 at 8:24 AM I NEVER growed up... still a little guy at heart!!! Why grow up anyway... no fun in that!!! XOX

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 2, 2018 at 7:50 AM Giggles, forever young! <3 Jack Ellison May 2, 2018 at 8:01 AM The body's old but the mind's still infantile!!! Huzzah!!! XOX

Arturo Michael May 2, 2018 at 5:20 AM I believe you...Have a nice day Jack... Jack Ellison May 2, 2018 at 5:32 AM WOW!!! Early we are or what!!!! You have a great one too... sunshine and temps close to 80! YEE HAW... finally!