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Let's Write A Tercet Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Joanna Daniel

Only Time Will Tell

Thinking back, so long ago 
Remembering things, I've done
Always had a place to go 

I would walk a country mile 
When I was young, it was fun 
Now, it would take me awhile 

These old legs can't walk no more 
I used to walk with my son 
In the park or to the store

That was when he lived with me
He moved- that son-of-a-gun 
Alone, I feel so lonely 

Yet, I'm old, and still alive 
I made it to ninety-one 
Hmm... how long will I survive 

Will I live another day? 
No regrets the life I've spun 
Only time will tell, they say
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Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:37 AM
I am seeing your name on Joanna's winners' list. Congratulations! Way to go. Sara K.
Poteet Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 5:45 AM
A bit of lost love from the son and love remembered of places/activities which are no longer available - plus especially love appreciated in the words "no regrets" at the end. Great title too - I enjoyed your piece which tells of adaptations to the endearing times of our lives as we age. A thoughtful piece, Charles, just not romantic love.
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:05 AM
This is nice, Charlie, but I wanted on nature or love, anyway, I sincerely thank you for participating in my contest:)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:09 PM
I share your sentiments and thoughts....no regrets. Faving.
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