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Only the Wind

as the sun descends thoughts caress your memory do you feel my longing touch? only the wind moves across the world to kiss you and your smile answers mine, yes. 7-11-21 Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest lovers question and answer form from Japan

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/6/2021 11:40:00 AM

Few words with much said. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/9/2021 12:38:00 PM

Hi Paula, thanks for your 'beautiful" comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/17/2021 6:09:00 PM

When the wind comes to touch the soul and the kiss of love arrives, all is good with this world. Its all in the smile isn't it dear poet. :)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/24/2021 9:19:00 AM

So true Rose Rose... So true :D

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/12/2021 6:20:00 PM

Dear Jeanne, your dreamy haiku is full of romantic longing. The heartfelt beauty of stirred emotions spill with ease from your wonderful pen. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/14/2021 10:50:00 AM

Hi Susan... Yes, my sweetie is far away and i feel it every day. Thanks for your wonderful comment. :D

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/11/2021 11:11:00 AM

Beautiful! Enjoyed!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/14/2021 10:50:00 AM

Ah, thank you so much!