Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Only the Wind

as the sun descends
thoughts caress your memory
do you feel my longing touch?

only the wind moves
across the world to kiss you
and your smile answers mine, yes.


7-11-21
Ni (2) Katuata Poetry Contest
lovers question and answer form from Japan

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Paula Goldsmith August 6, 2021 at 11:40 AM Few words with much said. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................ Jeanne Mcgee August 9, 2021 at 12:38 PM Hi Paula, thanks for your 'beautiful" comment.

Mystic Rose Rose July 17, 2021 at 6:09 PM When the wind comes to touch the soul and the kiss of love arrives, all is good with this world. Its all in the smile isn't it dear poet. :) Jeanne Mcgee July 24, 2021 at 9:19 AM So true Rose Rose... So true :D

Susan Ashley July 12, 2021 at 6:20 PM Dear Jeanne, your dreamy haiku is full of romantic longing. The heartfelt beauty of stirred emotions spill with ease from your wonderful pen. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan Jeanne Mcgee July 14, 2021 at 10:50 AM Hi Susan... Yes, my sweetie is far away and i feel it every day. Thanks for your wonderful comment. :D

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 11, 2021 at 11:11 AM Beautiful! Enjoyed! Jeanne Mcgee July 14, 2021 at 10:50 AM Ah, thank you so much!