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Only the Good Die Young

yes indeed life is not fair
why would the end be any different

we lose the people we love most
it breaks our heart and
shatters it in a million pieces
oh what a void it leaves
only the good die young

imagine if death was fair
some kind of logical exit strategy 
we could wrap our head around
something we could accept
at least vaguely understand
but that will never be

oh no ~ only the good die young
while others freely roam the earth
miserly bitter in their quest
inciting strife at every chance
their itty bitty shriveled hearts
at home sitting on a shelf
soaking in formaldehyde 

oh yes ~ only the good die young
what a waste and somehow
we have to bite our tongue 
we have to grin and bear it
live with the injustice of it all
maybe even find meaning
it’s just the way it is
and not about to change



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 28, 2021  'WORDS & MUSIC'

AP: 2nd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Shaw Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 6:51 PM
I'm not sure if I have got it all wrong, but, isn't dying young a blessing, not a curse . . .
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Not so good for those left behind to mourn ~
Mcguire Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 9:26 PM
So painfully true Miss Line, But God needs good people like you to stay behind and tell us how wonderful the person was and to remind us of the beauty in this world that we have forgotten about.
Gauthier Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy ~
Cunningham Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 12:18 PM
So very true Line, and something we find very hard to accept. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated ~
Proxenos Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Yes, only the good die young and it is a very bitter pill to lose a loved one and to have to deal with it because that is just how things happen. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer ~
Alex Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Truth.
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Thanks, Christuraj ~
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