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Only the Eye of Her

Only the eye of her Will bring my hands together Only the eye of her Will keep my hands closed forever

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Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/22/2009 8:24:00 AM

Emotionally powerful, but short. I liked it though....Aleera

Gareth Heslop

Date: 7/21/2009 11:20:00 AM

really, really like this one

Sabrina Huggins

Date: 7/20/2009 8:41:00 PM

That's very deep, i really like it. Its a beautiful piece....sabrina

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/20/2009 7:16:00 PM

strong write! Steve! a beautiful devotional, jim

Veronica Joseph

Date: 7/20/2009 5:12:00 PM

your recognition of her essence is wonderous Steve, another strong write as I feel her seeing you for who you are. That is what each of us want in our life partner, the safety of being yourself with that person, guarding nothing. well done.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/20/2009 4:56:00 PM

she is the "eye" of the storm! Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/20/2009 4:32:00 PM

Very nice ..thoughtful way to look at "forever" love. BG

John Freeman

Date: 7/20/2009 3:49:00 PM

A powerful woman there, Steve, Good luck! THANKS FOR COMMENT, ALWAYS APPRECIATE God bless Moses!