Only the Eye of Her

Only the eye of her
Will bring my hands together
Only the eye of her
Will keep my hands closed forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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De La Keur Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:24 AM
Emotionally powerful, but short. I liked it though....Aleera
Heslop Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 11:20 AM
really, really like this one
Huggins Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 8:41 PM
That's very deep, i really like it. Its a beautiful piece....sabrina
Goff Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 7:16 PM
strong write! Steve! a beautiful devotional, jim
Joseph Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 5:12 PM
your recognition of her essence is wonderous Steve, another strong write as I feel her seeing you for who you are. That is what each of us want in our life partner, the safety of being yourself with that person, guarding nothing. well done.
Guzzi Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:56 PM
she is the "eye" of the storm! Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Very nice ..thoughtful way to look at "forever" love. BG
Freeman Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 3:49 PM
A powerful woman there, Steve, Good luck! THANKS FOR COMMENT, ALWAYS APPRECIATE God bless Moses!
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