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Only the Critters Stayed

Lights out, lights out!in the run about, the critte rs flee to me. Storm, blazing lightening, air too w arm My friends with fur feel a curse On the wi nd- a sense of berzerk Huddling together, kit ty close for good measure Ozone green, bir ds stop the preen Feels like a train is gliding by, so close nigh Rumble the ground before the sound The animal s knew-I had no clue. we shudder in this shack back to back. A - growl here, a hiss there, out A banshee on the wind, mak es me want to flee Ye t the TWISTER keeps us here, shaking me nagerie Slamming ra in above our h eads- Oh the d read! Here we must stay - as buildings rock and sw ay Perha ps - for t h r es t of t h e d y h e a rts h e a v i ly w e i gh

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:35:00 PM
How true only the critters stay behind... SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:07:00 PM
Amy, your poem is the essence of what this contest was all about. Congrats on content and style!!
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Date: 3/22/2014 9:25:00 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, amy
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Date: 3/22/2014 7:17:00 PM
Totally made to be danger in creating... Congratulations on the win Amy Green... Enjoyed this a heap... Verlena
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Date: 3/22/2014 6:56:00 PM
Amy, awesome poem that really suits your form, I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win!
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