Only Solitude Speaks

~A leafless tree in the far away field immersed in twilight's hushness.... only solitude speaks~ ==============000=============
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Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Kash..I guess I thought here..hushness..was you using poetic license, the form kimo does not require SHOWING..it's ok to tell in this form..meaning you need not be OBJECTIVE/factual in a kimo..so hushness can be seen as SUBJECTIVE/fanciful...and if you already got a #1 why would I want to rain on your parade?
Richards Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations, Kash! A poem that brings a sense of peace and tranquility! Lovely!
Eastman Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your write and your win.
A   Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 7:10 PM
Kash, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in Brian's contest..xox~PD
Neels Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Loved this Kash ;) congratulations on your first place win!
Guzzi Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Go kash go! who's #1. Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 4:27 PM
congrats Kash on a super first place win for this marvelous poetry luv.., always entertaining luv..
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 2:27 PM
oiii. kashi buddy... love the overall presentation and theme of this 'kimu.. and super congrats for the win, wow..;) huggs!
Burch Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kash!!! Wonderful piece...big huggsss~deb
Long Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 12:00 PM
congrats on your win with this gem ..cory
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Kash. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Sometimes the solitude is golden..Congrats on your win..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Congrats Kash..sorry this is so late...the last line is wonderful ..BG
Bunton Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 2:58 PM
congrats on your win in the contest; a beautiful kimo that perfectly captures the silence and the solitude...
Brown Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations for your placement in this contest Kash. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 5:55 PM
ah but the wind whips in branches into song! Congrad's Light & Love
Horsman Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 5:19 PM
wonderful Kash, this is awesome, congrats on your placement. harry
Onclaud Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 8:49 PM
each word leading to the next with greeeat flow... amazing win for this kimo, kashi.. :) huggs!
Song Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 11:50 AM
Kimo-tastic!! Was this a FIG TREE? ha ha....( a lil take on the Garden of Eden). Best of luck...doubt any is needed! :)
Melesse Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 9:35 AM
What a beautiful image of a moment!!! Thank you kash:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:51 PM
wow, I love how you made yours about solitude, Kashinath. The first line gives me the tree's image and the second line is really beautiful "hushness!!"
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:52 PM
ravo Kash.. a spectacular image of a lonely tree .. great wording ..good luck luv..
. Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:08 PM
i love that first line! there;s just something magnificent when it comes to 'nakedness'. beautiful kimo Kash
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 3:46 PM
lovely Kash..Rick said my verse was OK thanks so much for watching out for me! PHEW! Light & Love
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