Only Reward of Actions Are To Pay Perhaps

in brain's evolution 
                                      evaluation's done of mind
                                limbs are like physical pipe medias 
                         through which sensational produces are passed
                        out of fictions caused by seeing and touching first
                                   a new born baby's mind casts

                                       As the first sense grows
                           environment touches through those medias
                                   learning influences on the way
                                           after mind's action 
                          heart speaks the truth because of soul's ray                  
                                tells us what the bodily universe is
                            only reward of actions are to pay perhaps

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Date: 1/8/2015 2:55:00 PM
Oh BL so curious, I want to know more, pay for what, pay how? Babies do have sensation in the womb don't they? hmm - more baby poems please. Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. In the mother's womb we have sense and after being born with sense all we grow as the outer Universe grows. With self spirit we do our actions on earth and accordingly prized. Loved always,bl
Date: 12/18/2014 10:59:00 AM
warming my heart, bl... i like how this was composed!.. huggs
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Date: 12/19/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
Date: 12/14/2014 6:06:00 AM
amazing sentiment here Bl, yes to pay i think gives one a better more true-full appreciation of what one as got...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 12/14/2014 6:16:00 AM
My best friend as i feel you truly. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem. Loved always,bl
Date: 12/14/2014 5:10:00 AM
- A really well written verse, my friend Bl - Love the line: " heart speaks the truth because of soul's ray" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:13:00 AM
Thanks a lot my lovely lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
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