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Only One Thing Left To Say

They laugh, While I cry. They point, As I die... Inside, I come undone. I am here with myself. I'm the only one, In this world... I'm unforgiving, for my sins. The pain I have caused others. Is where it all begins, In my mind... I have already gone. The sun has set over my life I will not see another dawn So this is goodbye...

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Fj Thomas

Date: 5/16/2018 12:43:00 PM

Many feel this way and fight their way through; I hope this person is able to as well. Very good flow Daisy.

John Fleming

Date: 11/4/2017 7:16:00 AM

I have taken a good look at a number of your highly descriptive poems, Daisy...obviously they all centre around the same common theme. They do say that "The darkest hour is just before the dawn"...perhaps you might catch a glimmer of that new dawn. I think you could write some very lovely poetry. :) john

Daisy Tyrrell
Date: 11/4/2017 7:52:00 AM

thankyou so much, i aspire to make something of poetry x

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2017 7:31:00 AM

This is really sad... Suicide is never the answer... I hope you have someone to talk to.. a lot of the times that helps.. Bullies are cowards, I hope you find your peace..