Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Only In You I See

Tap dances on steps to sanctuary sites
glued to visions felt from glory's grace
only in you I see
reflected in orbs of watchful care 
dipped in mocha swirls 
as time slowly disappears
a sense of attention
focusing on more than just an outer me

Soft shoe shuffles within the breeze
wistful remembrance and dainty dreams
filling the fragrant air 
with a gust of evergreen
calling ever so calmly
for opened eyes and hearts
to harbor a frail humanity
and follow a simple way

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Darren White January 19, 2017 at 7:54 AM Only in you I see//a sense of attention focusing on more than just an outer me...///... that just blew me away Tim. Is just so beautiful, something I also wish for people to see when they look at me. Fav no doubt bout it

Chuck Melugin January 18, 2017 at 4:51 PM Simplicity has a depth that's infinite! Extraordinary work, Tim My best to you. Chuck Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 5:09 PM Thanks so much Chuck

Chris Green January 18, 2017 at 4:25 PM So very beautiful Tim, when they focus on more than just what they see, they look deeper and understand, that is definitely a beautiful thing Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 5:08 PM Thank you Chris

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2017 at 3:56 PM sweet one, Tim. One part of it reminded me of the dancing scene in La La Land. did you see that movie. This kind of evokes some of the magic feelings like i got from that movie. Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 4:07 PM I haven't seen it. I will put it on my list.

Charmaine Chircop January 18, 2017 at 3:24 PM Ilove that mocha and those soft shoe shuffles..and so many others exceptional lines.The king of romance strikes again..A fave. Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 4:05 PM Thank you my dear friend. I'm partial to that mocha as well.

Heidi Sands January 18, 2017 at 3:04 PM Very nice Tim! :) Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 4:03 PM Thanks Heidi

Demetrios Trifiatis January 18, 2017 at 12:26 PM A poetic breeze that caresses the soul dear, Tim! Tim Smith January 18, 2017 at 4:02 PM Thank you my friend