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Only In You I See

Tap dances on steps to sanctuary sites
glued to visions felt from glory's grace
only in you I see
reflected in orbs of watchful care 
dipped in mocha swirls 
as time slowly disappears
a sense of attention
focusing on more than just an outer me

Soft shoe shuffles within the breeze
wistful remembrance and dainty dreams
filling the fragrant air 
with a gust of evergreen
calling ever so calmly
for opened eyes and hearts
to harbor a frail humanity
and follow a simple way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/19/2017 7:54:00 AM
Only in you I see//a sense of attention focusing on more than just an outer me...///... that just blew me away Tim. Is just so beautiful, something I also wish for people to see when they look at me. Fav no doubt bout it
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:51:00 PM
Simplicity has a depth that's infinite! Extraordinary work, Tim My best to you. Chuck
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 5:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Chuck
Date: 1/18/2017 4:25:00 PM
So very beautiful Tim, when they focus on more than just what they see, they look deeper and understand, that is definitely a beautiful thing
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Chris
Date: 1/18/2017 3:56:00 PM
sweet one, Tim. One part of it reminded me of the dancing scene in La La Land. did you see that movie. This kind of evokes some of the magic feelings like i got from that movie.
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 4:07:00 PM
I haven't seen it. I will put it on my list.
Date: 1/18/2017 3:24:00 PM
Ilove that mocha and those soft shoe shuffles..and so many others exceptional lines.The king of romance strikes again..A fave.
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I'm partial to that mocha as well.
Date: 1/18/2017 3:04:00 PM
Very nice Tim! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 1/18/2017 12:26:00 PM
A poetic breeze that caresses the soul dear, Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 1/18/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you my friend