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Only In My Mind

I laid beside him as we breath in unison We watch the clouds settle as the mystery unfolds I gently pressed his lips into mine As I whisper I love you. He gently brushed my hair with his loving hands. I wish I could freeze the moment till the end. I wish I could capture his eyes looking deep into mine I'd be lost in this recollection forever. It's only in my dreams It's only when I see a piece of you. It's only when I see you breath for me Live for me Die for me Lie to me... Your love is just a state of mind. A powerful imitation of bliss An unfaltering facade of truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/15/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:44:00 PM
Desiree Gapuz, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:08:00 PM
DESIREE, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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