Ayanda Ndaba Poet Free verse

Only If and If Only

If only and only if i was the moon
I would be the fullest moon
Brightening up your darkest nights
If only and only if i was the wind
I would blow love your way non stop
Westerlies to the easterlies
Northerlies to the southerlies
If only and only if i was the rain
I would forever shower you with love
Washing away all sadness
Like the desert needs the rain
I would be the oasis if only
And only if

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Skat A November 17, 2015 at 10:33 PM Ayanda, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~ Ayanda Ndaba November 18, 2015 at 1:31 AM Thank you Skat...it is highly appreciated!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 17, 2015 at 3:39 AM wow..beautiful poem :) Ayanda Ndaba November 18, 2015 at 1:32 AM As they say , beauty is in the eye of the beholder...Thank you!

Daver Austin November 16, 2015 at 10:44 AM I love this touching declaration of love. Inventive and well written. Congrats. daver Ayanda Ndaba November 18, 2015 at 1:29 AM Daver love is a gift that should be cherished by all and experienced by all , it is a choice to be sad or unhappy for , no one is in control of ones' feelings but one! Thank you.

Hugo Venter November 3, 2015 at 12:35 AM Beautiful use of imagery and I quite like the structure. Very moving piece of writing, Ayanda :-) Ayanda Ndaba November 3, 2015 at 11:17 AM Thank you...

Poet Destroyer A November 1, 2015 at 3:17 PM Ayanda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Ayanda Ndaba November 2, 2015 at 6:20 AM Thank you Linda i sure trust i will enjoy the Poetry Soup...