Only If

If I could only
Only if
Then I could
Flee this cliff
If I just had
Had I just
Then perhaps
I could trust
One more piece
Piece of puzzle
I'd break the chains
Of this muzzle
Once I get
Get this break
I'd make not one
More mistake
It's all I need
Need just this
Life would be
Full of bliss
But I was wrong
Wrong all along
Now I sing
The wanting song
If I could tie
Tie this knot
Then I'd have
Everything I've sought
If I could only
Only if
Then I could flee
Flee this cliff

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/9/2015 9:41:00 AM
There is an adage that states "be careful what you ask for - you just might get it." The repetition worked well as "stops". And as the poem points out "living is always done on the edge".
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:41:00 AM
Anna, this the third poem on this same form I read today!!! like it!!!You keep me going~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:13:00 AM
keep away from the edge Anna !!!!- I do like the form you have used for this - very creative write:-)Hugs Jan xx
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