Only I Can Say

Your first step brings so much joy to me

This is the first sign that you can do things by your own

I am happy and also scared when you start to walk

What if you fall, what if you cry

Only I can say it’s part of your GROWING

 

When you first entered the school

I am so worried you will not like it

What if you fail, what if you cry

Only I can say it’s part of your FOUNDATION

 

When you succeed to entered college

I am so proud and grateful

I am frightened of who is around you

What if there is pressure, what if there is stress

Only I can say it’s for your FUTURE

 

When you finally became an adult

I am so blessed you grew up a good person

I am scared what life will brings in you

What if there is too much risk, what if you are depress

Only I can say it’s part of LIFE

 

When you settle down

I am so happy you made it perfect

I am not scared anymore

You grew up strong

 

Now that I am old

I love looking at you

I am not scared when I am no longer with you

Only I can say I gave you EVERYTHING that I could

I LOVE YOU my child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/4/2018 10:53:00 AM
Hi Loreli, this is a wonderful poem on watching a child grow. There are all the worries and also all the joys. I loved the content of this write. It did touch me. have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Loreli Perez
Date: 7/5/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Vladisay, I wrote this for my children. :)
Date: 5/23/2018 4:16:00 PM
Great poem Loreli..
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Loreli Perez
Date: 5/24/2018 12:41:00 AM
Thank you :)
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