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Only For Kids

Living on a dream wishing on a twinkling star only for the kids ~*~ Note: For all the "kids" on PS with love, Audrey

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Jack Horne

Date: 4/24/2014 3:16:00 PM

beautiful - I guess I'm just a big kid, LOL

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/19/2010 12:25:00 PM

Fantastic read I really enjoyed this one Audrey.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.Teresa

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2010 12:51:00 PM

Terrific poem for the kids, just adorable >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 11:03:00 AM

Audrey, I am trying one more time to see if my comment on a poem gets to you.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/3/2010 8:06:00 AM

good wish for this old kid to take in!! thanks!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2010 6:26:00 AM

I think that I'll be a child today..Great write. Sara

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 9:55:00 PM

Smile ~*~ So pretty & soft; just like "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul" ~ "Lovely Thought; Lovely Dedcation ~ Lovely Lady, 'You Are;' A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All Whom You Love," John!:) ~ Smile, let Us go see "Your Treasures" other poe....

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 9:50:00 PM

Smile ~ But I do understand fully what "You Brightness" is saying here "Dear Precious & Lovely Audrey Carey" ~ We must walk within a balance or reality & dreamings imaginations amid this life & world We live in today but, there shall soon come a day when these chains will forever be stripped away and then, We will behold eternals paradise, beyond Our wildest of fantasticals imaginations ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/2/2010 9:45:00 PM

Smile ~ "Only for Kids" ~ "Yes," you know, "Christ" said that unless one has the faith of that as a child, in no way shall they enter The Kingdom of Heaven ~ I guess what He was saying within essence was that, as a child believes All things to be possible amid their vivid and fascinating imaginations then, so need We ~ ....Cont:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/1/2010 11:31:00 PM

Hey, my BBF, you missed the "kids" ...US KIDS!! This is about "kids" with faith who live on dreams and wish on a star!! We live by faith so we are the "Kids"! See what I mean, my BBF? I should've put the word, Kid in the title in parenthesis. ..LOL Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 10:23:00 PM

I thought i read this before but I don't see my comment here. hmmm. Well, thanks for your wonderful comment on my limerick . so kind of you. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 9:22:00 PM

Don't think I agree my BBF.. living on a dream...all good..... wishing on a twinkling star... very good.. only for the kids...not so... all I have done is dream of being married to Ron and bingo.. wishing and hoping and crying and praying did it...so as cute as this Senryu is.. keep positive and your dream will come true too.. keep the faith luv..

James Peranteau

Date: 9/1/2010 5:50:00 PM

this is def cute and one that i will share with Noah my 7yr old son ! Thanks for your kind words Audrey and fav'in my poem...yet they never put it through as a fav. Its happened before...I thank you for the thought though! Have a great night dear poet ! much love, james

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/1/2010 3:18:00 PM

It's so important to keep on being a kid at heart no matter how old you are! Nice Senryu dear Audrey. Thanks for your comments on my win.

Susan Palli

Date: 9/1/2010 11:30:00 AM

so innocent

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 8:02:00 AM

Children do believe that their dreams and wishes can come true. Very nice poem for the "kids," dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2010 7:06:00 AM

I'm still a child at heart.....so close eyes tight, and make my wishes! Nice one, Audrey! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:26:00 AM

Nice gift of love you give to all the kids on PS, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2010 10:33:00 PM

SWEET one for them, Audrey! LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/31/2010 6:59:00 PM

I just came out to play and happened on your poem, Audrey. :) enjoyed

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2010 6:04:00 PM

With four children of my own, I had to read this one Audrey. It is so important to teach our young to dream because later in life they may make their dreams into reality. Lovely Senryu. Thank you for your sweet comments. Aloha, Connie

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/31/2010 11:27:00 AM

I agree with Doris, I sometimes want my childhood back, just so I can wish upon a star.. Great write Audrey, love Wilma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/31/2010 10:06:00 AM

I am a big kid so I read it... ok?