Only For Kids

Living on a dream
          
             wishing on a twinkling star
                  
                            only for the kids

                                       ~*~

Note:  For all the "kids" on PS with love, Audrey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horne Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 3:16 PM
beautiful - I guess I'm just a big kid, LOL
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Fantastic read I really enjoyed this one Audrey.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.Teresa
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 12:51 PM
Terrific poem for the kids, just adorable >> James
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Audrey, I am trying one more time to see if my comment on a poem gets to you.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 8:06 AM
good wish for this old kid to take in!! thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 6:26 AM
I think that I'll be a child today..Great write. Sara
Rhinem Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Smile ~*~ So pretty & soft; just like "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul" ~ "Lovely Thought; Lovely Dedcation ~ Lovely Lady, 'You Are;' A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All Whom You Love," John!:) ~ Smile, let Us go see "Your Treasures" other poe....
Rhinem Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Smile ~ But I do understand fully what "You Brightness" is saying here "Dear Precious & Lovely Audrey Carey" ~ We must walk within a balance or reality & dreamings imaginations amid this life & world We live in today but, there shall soon come a day when these chains will forever be stripped away and then, We will behold eternals paradise, beyond Our wildest of fantasticals imaginations ~ ....Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Smile ~ "Only for Kids" ~ "Yes," you know, "Christ" said that unless one has the faith of that as a child, in no way shall they enter The Kingdom of Heaven ~ I guess what He was saying within essence was that, as a child believes All things to be possible amid their vivid and fascinating imaginations then, so need We ~ ....Cont:)
Haick Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 11:31 PM
Hey, my BBF, you missed the "kids" ...US KIDS!! This is about "kids" with faith who live on dreams and wish on a star!! We live by faith so we are the "Kids"! See what I mean, my BBF? I should've put the word, Kid in the title in parenthesis. ..LOL Love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:23 PM
I thought i read this before but I don't see my comment here. hmmm. Well, thanks for your wonderful comment on my limerick . so kind of you. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 9:22 PM
Don't think I agree my BBF.. living on a dream...all good..... wishing on a twinkling star... very good.. only for the kids...not so... all I have done is dream of being married to Ron and bingo.. wishing and hoping and crying and praying did it...so as cute as this Senryu is.. keep positive and your dream will come true too.. keep the faith luv..
Peranteau Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:50 PM
this is def cute and one that i will share with Noah my 7yr old son ! Thanks for your kind words Audrey and fav'in my poem...yet they never put it through as a fav. Its happened before...I thank you for the thought though! Have a great night dear poet ! much love, james
Scripca Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 3:18 PM
It's so important to keep on being a kid at heart no matter how old you are! Nice Senryu dear Audrey. Thanks for your comments on my win.
Palli Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 11:30 AM
so innocent
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Children do believe that their dreams and wishes can come true. Very nice poem for the "kids," dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 7:06 AM
I'm still a child at heart.....so close eyes tight, and make my wishes! Nice one, Audrey! :)
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Nice gift of love you give to all the kids on PS, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:33 PM
SWEET one for them, Audrey! LUv, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:59 PM
I just came out to play and happened on your poem, Audrey. :) enjoyed
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 6:04 PM
With four children of my own, I had to read this one Audrey. It is so important to teach our young to dream because later in life they may make their dreams into reality. Lovely Senryu. Thank you for your sweet comments. Aloha, Connie
Neels Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 11:27 AM
I agree with Doris, I sometimes want my childhood back, just so I can wish upon a star.. Great write Audrey, love Wilma
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:06 AM
I am a big kid so I read it... ok?
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