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Only For Kids

Living on a dream
          
             wishing on a twinkling star
                  
                            only for the kids

                                       ~*~

Note:  For all the "kids" on PS with love, Audrey
  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2014 3:16:00 PM
beautiful - I guess I'm just a big kid, LOL
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:25:00 PM
Fantastic read I really enjoyed this one Audrey.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.Teresa
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:51:00 PM
Terrific poem for the kids, just adorable >> James
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Date: 9/6/2010 11:03:00 AM
Audrey, I am trying one more time to see if my comment on a poem gets to you.
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Date: 9/3/2010 8:06:00 AM
good wish for this old kid to take in!! thanks!
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:26:00 AM
I think that I'll be a child today..Great write. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:55:00 PM
Smile ~*~ So pretty & soft; just like "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul" ~ "Lovely Thought; Lovely Dedcation ~ Lovely Lady, 'You Are;' A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All Whom You Love," John!:) ~ Smile, let Us go see "Your Treasures" other poe....
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:50:00 PM
Smile ~ But I do understand fully what "You Brightness" is saying here "Dear Precious & Lovely Audrey Carey" ~ We must walk within a balance or reality & dreamings imaginations amid this life & world We live in today but, there shall soon come a day when these chains will forever be stripped away and then, We will behold eternals paradise, beyond Our wildest of fantasticals imaginations ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:45:00 PM
Smile ~ "Only for Kids" ~ "Yes," you know, "Christ" said that unless one has the faith of that as a child, in no way shall they enter The Kingdom of Heaven ~ I guess what He was saying within essence was that, as a child believes All things to be possible amid their vivid and fascinating imaginations then, so need We ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 9/1/2010 11:31:00 PM
Hey, my BBF, you missed the "kids" ...US KIDS!! This is about "kids" with faith who live on dreams and wish on a star!! We live by faith so we are the "Kids"! See what I mean, my BBF? I should've put the word, Kid in the title in parenthesis. ..LOL Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/1/2010 10:23:00 PM
I thought i read this before but I don't see my comment here. hmmm. Well, thanks for your wonderful comment on my limerick . so kind of you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:22:00 PM
Don't think I agree my BBF.. living on a dream...all good..... wishing on a twinkling star... very good.. only for the kids...not so... all I have done is dream of being married to Ron and bingo.. wishing and hoping and crying and praying did it...so as cute as this Senryu is.. keep positive and your dream will come true too.. keep the faith luv..
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:50:00 PM
this is def cute and one that i will share with Noah my 7yr old son ! Thanks for your kind words Audrey and fav'in my poem...yet they never put it through as a fav. Its happened before...I thank you for the thought though! Have a great night dear poet ! much love, james
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Date: 9/1/2010 3:18:00 PM
It's so important to keep on being a kid at heart no matter how old you are! Nice Senryu dear Audrey. Thanks for your comments on my win.
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Date: 9/1/2010 11:30:00 AM
so innocent
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Date: 9/1/2010 8:02:00 AM
Children do believe that their dreams and wishes can come true. Very nice poem for the "kids," dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:06:00 AM
I'm still a child at heart.....so close eyes tight, and make my wishes! Nice one, Audrey! :)
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:26:00 AM
Nice gift of love you give to all the kids on PS, Audrey
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:33:00 PM
SWEET one for them, Audrey! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:59:00 PM
I just came out to play and happened on your poem, Audrey. :) enjoyed
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:04:00 PM
With four children of my own, I had to read this one Audrey. It is so important to teach our young to dream because later in life they may make their dreams into reality. Lovely Senryu. Thank you for your sweet comments. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/31/2010 11:27:00 AM
I agree with Doris, I sometimes want my childhood back, just so I can wish upon a star.. Great write Audrey, love Wilma
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:06:00 AM
I am a big kid so I read it... ok?
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