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You took notice of me when I paid no attention It's a question I know you put some thought into It was good how it was it was more personal I felt a smile the whole time and it makes me wonder how long it has been going on?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 9:42:00 PM
Kind of erry to think someone is watching, nice flow, it seems more like someone who admires this person, thought provolking poem. Judy Riley
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