Onlooker

You took notice of me
when I paid no attention
It's a question I know
you put some thought into
It was good how it was
it was more personal
I felt a smile the whole time
and it makes me wonder
how long it has been going on?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 19, 2009 at 9:42 PM
Kind of erry to think someone is watching, nice flow, it seems more like someone who admires this person, thought provolking poem. Judy Riley
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