Ones Time Upon This Little Blue Planet

One’s Time
Upon this little blue planet
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One’s time could be as beautiful as a sunset !
One’s time could be as desolate as a desert !
One’s time could be as colourful as a rainbow !
One’s time could be as bleak as storm clouds !
One’s time could be as warm as spring rain !
One’s time could be as scary as a roller-coaster !
One’s time could be as much fun as a carnival !
One’s time could be as boring as a merry-go-round !
One’s time could be as exciting as white water rafting !
One’s time could be as light as a kite upon the wind !
One’s time could be as petrifying as the unknown !
One’s time could be as comforting as mother’s breast !
One’s time could be as uncertain as the weather !
One’s time could be as positive as the spirit of love !
One’s time could be as putrefying as spoiled food !
One’s time could be as nourishing as great cuisine !
One’s time could be as empty and dark as a great void !
One’s time could be as full as our evolving universe !
One’s time could be as moments we jump into with both feet !
One’s time could be as a whole, by sucking the life out of them !
One’s time could be as much, or as little as the choices we make !
One’s time could be as a great adventure !, if only time, we’d take !

B. J. “A” 2
November 10th 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/26/2019 5:41:00 AM
amazing, excellent, great write
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 6/26/2019 12:47:00 PM
--------------------------------------------------------------- Wm. J. Atfield Jr. bja2mgmenter@gmail.com Wednesday June 26th, 2019, at 10:46 AM Thank you Mahtab Bangalee, for taking the time and for commenting on my stuff. Happy to feel that you think so “ amazing, excellent, great write ”, for your kind words and for stopping by and reading some of my stuff. A pleasant surprise . As Always Bill .
Date: 11/10/2016 1:28:00 PM
Great writing. A lot to think about!
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William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 11/11/2016 1:46:00 PM
Good morning Ladies : Thank you both for stopping by and visiting my site. Thank you Heidi Sands, for the undeserved strength of your comment, “ Great writing. ” but I am flattered that you think so. And yes, “ A lot to think about! ” my Dear, I guess it is. After reading some of your poems I am able to the great humanitarian you are . Thank you San Woo, who lives in Sacramento, California, for taking the time to read and acknowledge my stuff with flattering comments like “ indeed! good one... :) ” I never got out your way, - even when I lived in beautiful San Francisco for a while -, even though I had an old friend who lives there (( Joe Heine ??? )) of which I am cirtain you would not know . “ SHE DEVIL FIRST COUSIN ” Known a few like her !!!, but glad they were not related or I had to endure them for more than a brief moment . B. J. “ A ” 2 (( Bill . ))
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