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One's Real Life

One's real life dwells

in the depths of his immortal soul

thus

no matter what happens to the body it hosts her

she unaffected shall remain 

for 

it carries God's spiritual treasures 

back into eternity's domain! 








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      13 APRIL 2020

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Shirley Hawkins Date: 4/19/2020 8:41:00 AM A beautiful poem, Thank you for sharing it. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones at this sad time...Take care...Shirley Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 4/14/2020 10:52:00 AM I tried to explain this to my friend who lose a son, her ex-husband buried him hours away from her and she was crying she couldn't go see him...I said he is not there, only his shell is, he sees you and knows you can't go there but he is here with you not up there regardless... another wonderful write Demetrios … hugs XoXo Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/13/2020 1:15:00 PM - Wonderful written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/13/2020 1:49:00 PM Thank you for your precious visit and comment dearest Anne-Lise. God bless you my friend. Take care of yourself. Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/13/2020 12:31:00 PM Mortals we may be but the good we do in this life will carry to the next in our soul. Tom Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/13/2020 1:47:00 PM Yes, it is true my friend Tom but it is also true that this goes for those who do evil also. Thank you!

Panagiota Romios Date: 4/13/2020 11:46:00 AM Demetrios! Perfect! Heading to my FAVS. Utterly beautiful.. Panagiota xx Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/13/2020 1:44:00 PM Good to see you dearest, Panagiota. Thank you so much for your kind comment and for the, FAV. Blessings and hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/13/2020 8:08:00 AM A wonderful reminder for mortals my friend. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/13/2020 8:12:00 AM Thank you my friend! Yes, we morals need reminders for we often forget we are...mortals! hahaha Blessings!

John Fleming Date: 4/13/2020 4:04:00 AM I don't often say this about anyone's poetry, professor...but this is very, very good indeed. My favourite poet, Ezra Pound, would, I am certain, have given it a quiet nod of deserving approval. My very best regards, Demetrios. :) john Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 4/13/2020 7:00:00 AM My friend, John let me start by thanking you for your gracious comment and by suggesting that the renown Ezra W.L. Pound (put aside his political views) would approve of my humble writing! That would be a real honor. Blessings my friend. Keep safe!