Ones Hopes

Showers of much stress Beating down on a stiff soul Berating torn minds The worn ideals of ones hopes Still dangling by a lone string
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 14, 2012 at 7:33 PM
RUSSELL, DEEP..PD
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June 14, 2012 at 3:30 PM
Yes, those ideals sometimes get a beating from just living..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad to learn that your family takes advantage of food fresh from the garden also..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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