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ONENESS

I opened my eyes and there I was sitting on a clear white sandy beach I began to take note of my colorful surroundings My eyes carefully wandered until they rested upon the beautiful sight of the clear mass of salted water My ears were consumed by the gushing sounds of its crystal-like waves My nose deeply inhaled its sea-weed aura of the underwater world My mind was at ease and my heart was fulfilled as I closed my eyes once again There I became one with my natural surroundings meshed with the exotic sights pleasant sounds and a rich aroma each experience reminding me of the simplicities of life

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Date: 6/27/2024 12:30:00 PM
You take the reader to your thoughts... Expressed so poetically and visually..
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Patti Pedrus
Date: 6/28/2024 4:14:00 PM
Yes, describing that time on the beach ---serene state

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