One.Little.Apple

One little two little three little habits,
Four little five little six little rabbits,
Seven little eight little nine little hobbits,
but...
10th to the 10 said two little droplets...

nine little eight little seven little pea pods,
six little five little four little Tree Gods,
Three little tea pots...

Too...So, Little had thoughts.
One main.frame will cost a lot....
So.One.Black hat is what I got.

One little two little three little platelets,
Four little five little six little Gate steps,
Seven little eight little nine little Job.lets,

it's still...
10th to the 10
said Two little droplets...

nine little eight little seven little tree pods,
six little five little four little T.spots
Three little two little...
There's more then one Apple?

H.OLA!



"Hola is the most used form of saying hello in Spanish..."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/15/2009 6:51:00 AM
Hola vuenos dias amiga, como estas ? Eres tu tengo mui poetica. .... Loved this Poem Izzy .... brilliant !
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:53:00 PM
Hola Izzy, you could have been a mathematician. You should take a look at math poetry, which is very unique. I like your ingenuity in this piece.
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Date: 5/14/2009 3:28:00 PM
Hola Izzy! So creative! Thanks for your most thoughtful comments. Appreciate it so much! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/14/2009 12:05:00 AM
Very inventive writing Izzy.Thanks for your kind words today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/13/2009 9:12:00 PM
This is interesting and unique, I do love it! Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always apprceiated.
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