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one you

your not the first to think it
others thought it to
not even first to say it
its been said long before you
that special feeling
you think unique
others felt it
long been critiqued
whatever you done
accomplishment you think
its been done and done
google and check the link
everything and more
nothing original or new
anything you thought
something you do
its all been done before
just facts and nothing more
but something that has never been
is there is only one you my friend
 you are a fraternal twin???


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Date: 6/3/2025 12:39:00 PM
Hi Fritz, how r u? Rhyming poem for some reason I'm learning Rhyming and I thought it didn't really Rhyme don't worry bcoz thats how I wrote mine but I'm learning as I comment on poems at poetrysoup. I invite u to visit my poetrysoup hp and choose a poem to comment on so that I know u visited. Thanks ~Jac
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Fritz Purdum
Date: 6/3/2025 12:44:00 PM
Thank you

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