One Yellow Star

One yellow star
Part of a constellation 
Trillions of miles away
A ball of hydrogen gas
Surrounded by unseen planets
It burns with immeasurable heat
Trillions of miles away
A young girl lies in a field of night flowers
Looking into a pitch black sky
She sees the one yellow star
And she wishes on the first star she sees that night
She wishes for love
She wishes for happiness and health
Trillions of miles away
That one yellow star burns
The unseen planets orbit around it
It may never hear the young girl’s wishes
The wishes that will never be granted
That one yellow star doesn’t know about the wishes
Or maybe it just doesn’t care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 7:36 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Robert. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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September 3, 2009 at 6:30 PM
Beautifully written, but it reflects such a sad view. I posted one today about hope and you were on my mind when I was writing it. You just need a lift, my friend. That yellow star probably "doesn't know about the wishes" now...but someday it may! Love, Carolyn
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September 3, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Words spoken go out into the universe and have their effect on it. Interesting subject. Sara
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