One Year In Love

Yellow Letter Pad

In the environs of Kashmir our romance unfurled
As we sat honey eyed in our celestial world
Time had stopped running and lovingly slowed
A year had gone by and our unsurmountable joy glowed
As we held hands in the dim lights of the balcony's corner
Of a our first five star hotel in a celebratory dinner
Overlooking the Dal Lake with hundreds of houseboats brightly lit
Like sparkling stars had descended while I felt the light winds flit

My greek god had proposed to me in a car park a year ago
Till then we had only eyed each other, the future I didn't know
But was always struck by lightning and there was a thunderous tempo
Our families were familiar, but each ran after his own rainbow
The silence was broken when I migrated and stood on my own
I was a voracious letter writer and let the seeds of love be sown
I compelled a man suffering from writer's cramp for penned exchanges
Dried flowers were embossed on my yellow letter pad pages-
They had to be sadly burnt down some while ago
As white ants too had started romancing with them and I had to let it go-
He paid me some outstation visits as we sat by the lake
He regaled me with his anecdotes of his adventures in the army
My knight with his charismatic chauvinism did charm me
A year later I culminated my relationship with my beloved
As promised he took me to the paradise on earth that he just loved


(February 11, 2016
Contest: One Year In Love)

March 20, 2016
Contest: Screwed # 12
Sponsor : Rob Carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Awesome win.... Balveen... Linda
Haight Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Beautifully written and so romantic, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Turner Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Ah Kashmir, no wonder you fell in love. Such a wonderful love story. Damned ants! Congratulations on your win. Peace my dear, Balveen:)
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:14 PM
I swear Daniel! They chewed into hundreds of our love letters! I cremated them along with my love letters!! Thanks all the same!
Dutta Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Nice Romance Balveen. Congrats to ein. AnishaD
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thanks Anisha!
Scars Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in this contest! This has wonderful flow full of romance..-luloo
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Laura!
A   Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Linda!
Lane Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 7:57 AM
A beautiful love story, Balveen. Congratulations.
Cheema Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Lin!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace