One Year In Love

Yellow Letter Pad

In the environs of Kashmir our romance unfurled
As we sat honey eyed in our celestial world
Time had stopped running and lovingly slowed
A year had gone by and our unsurmountable joy glowed
As we held hands in the dim lights of the balcony's corner
Of a our first five star hotel in a celebratory dinner
Overlooking the Dal Lake with hundreds of houseboats brightly lit
Like sparkling stars had descended while I felt the light winds flit

My greek god had proposed to me in a car park a year ago
Till then we had only eyed each other, the future I didn't know
But was always struck by lightning and there was a thunderous tempo
Our families were familiar, but each ran after his own rainbow
The silence was broken when I migrated and stood on my own
I was a voracious letter writer and let the seeds of love be sown
I compelled a man suffering from writer's cramp for penned exchanges
Dried flowers were embossed on my yellow letter pad pages-
They had to be sadly burnt down some while ago
As white ants too had started romancing with them and I had to let it go-
He paid me some outstation visits as we sat by the lake
He regaled me with his anecdotes of his adventures in the army
My knight with his charismatic chauvinism did charm me
A year later I culminated my relationship with my beloved
As promised he took me to the paradise on earth that he just loved


(February 11, 2016
Contest: One Year In Love)

March 20, 2016
Contest: Screwed # 12
Sponsor : Rob Carmack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/28/2016 8:54:00 PM
Awesome win.... Balveen... Linda
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:08:00 PM
Beautifully written and so romantic, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 2/21/2016 12:54:00 PM
Ah Kashmir, no wonder you fell in love. Such a wonderful love story. Damned ants! Congratulations on your win. Peace my dear, Balveen:)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:14:00 PM
I swear Daniel! They chewed into hundreds of our love letters! I cremated them along with my love letters!! Thanks all the same!
Date: 2/21/2016 9:35:00 AM
Nice Romance Balveen. Congrats to ein. AnishaD
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 2/21/2016 9:01:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in this contest! This has wonderful flow full of romance..-luloo
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Laura!
Date: 2/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/21/2016 7:57:00 AM
A beautiful love story, Balveen. Congratulations.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Lin!
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