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My thoughts let go of a thousand memories, like faces, dates, times and places; yet, I can easily recall each and every detail, on the day of your funeral. In the middle of a snow storm I followed, the wind blowing back my long hair; we meandered down a winding cold path, the wind pausing in the trees. Snowflakes fell on me from the tangled branches, falling like weeping tears cascading down; I am lost in this forever, ever memory- today the snow drifts in the cemetery. and a headstone is buried deep in the pure white, with one engraved word revealed; in this pristine lonely winter wonderland, only one word can be seen- Mother. _________________________________ September 24, 2014 Poetry/Verse/One Word Copyright Protected, ID 18-1067-461-01 All Rights Reserved. Contest - Early October 2018, Standard Sponsor- Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 11/9/2018 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Carol, Curtis, Connie, Line, LJ, and Jay for visiting my poem with comments and congratulations ~
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Date: 10/30/2018 3:31:00 PM
That was beautifully sad.
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Date: 10/9/2018 10:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win, DH
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Date: 10/6/2018 9:54:00 AM
Wow - What an exquisitely penned poem, DH. Congrats on your much deserved gold medal win. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 10/4/2018 11:48:00 PM
Your expressive poem reveals the kind sorrow that we never forget. Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Constance!
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Date: 10/4/2018 10:55:00 PM
Constance, my heart goes out to you in a sense of sympathy and empathy. I lost my Mother many years ago. Ironically, the last time I talked with her was on Mother's Day. Two weeks later, I flew home for her funeral. Time may heal many wounds, but not all, as the adage goes. Yours is, understandably, a first place win. Congratulations, my dear friend!
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Date: 10/4/2018 9:56:00 AM
Heidi and Andrea, thank you for visiting my poem and commenting. Yes Andrea, I keep repeating the theme of mother, probably because I will never get over her death until I gasp my own last breath.
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Date: 10/2/2018 3:47:00 PM
constance. I see this theme repeated in so many beautiful ways by you. I am always repeating the theme of "first great romantic night" . It is so interesting to me how different poets keep going back to similar themes. Very well done, and thanks so much for the inspiration and my win in your last contest.
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Date: 10/2/2018 3:17:00 PM
A beautiful and sad poem! Well written. I can relate to the snow at the graveyard from my own experience too.
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