One With the Universe

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the morning quiet as a prayer stood breathless before me intoxicating in all its modesty inspiring its wondrous silence the world asleep even the sun slow to rise stretching time and so i lingered at one with the universe on the coattails of summer waiting for a sign from you AP: 1st place 2021 Posted on November 7, 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2021 3:25:00 PM

You were on the coattails of summer... I believe that the sign you were seeking was/is on the cattails. ~ Meow

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2021 8:05:00 AM

What !? LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2021 4:05:00 PM

wow, this is amazing and I see it got first place but I can't recall which contest it would have been for. AP?? Keep up this kind of work, Line. Also thanks for my win in your last contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2021 4:24:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. It was an AP contest ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/9/2021 5:22:00 AM

Nothing quite like early morning silence when you feel at one with the universe...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Delice.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2021 7:57:00 AM

I love the 3rd verse especially and the picture! Beautiful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim ~