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One With the Elements

The sun’s rays pounded down on my skin The pool glittered in my desperate search for hydration I dipped my impermeable skin in the crystal clear water I watched my reflection stare back at me The crystallization of her eyes The invigorating beads creeping to my elbows The lost look in her eyes, dreaming of submerging I watched my reflection stare back at me This sweltering day, a challenge is faced I chased my reflection with a slip and a splash Raindrops hit my face, a requisite I felt one with precipitation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 11:57:00 PM
Viola, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/18/2016 3:41:00 AM
This piece is unique and splendid Viola. Congratulations on your well deserved win! #7 ; )
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Date: 4/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Viola..
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:39:00 AM
Viola, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/17/2016 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Water Element contest with such a deserving write! Thank you for entering Viola
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Date: 4/3/2016 1:26:00 AM
Viola... Awesome imagery.. you described one with the elements perfectly. A 7... Linda
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