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Written on January 14, 2024

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Risking the wishes of a silent night, Colored in hope, Silent and slow, rising far off, Beyond the milky slumber of a sunset, Blazing bloodshot and drinking Melancholy, ruddy faced, As the moments, Poured out on the twilight, Leaving echoes of yesterday Amid prayers for tomorrow and yet, Faded beneath the reddish haze, Mysteries, alive Like the scarlet blaze, Raising its heavy hand to the moon, Hello, she smiles, Remembering that, yes, Just this moment her light has become, More than just a passing memory, But an imprint on history, She is alive, like the darkening past, Risking the wishes of a silent night… She raises her hand to the moon, Bleeding light despite the knowledge That soon, she will be gone, Just a memory in tones of amber and gold, Bold memory floating on the seas, Where hearts are enchanted by her leaving, Her mysterious exodus from the evening.

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Date: 1/14/2024 2:41:00 PM
your poem left me breathless, Gina. Your images were vivid and enchanting in their own way. This was a delightful poem to read, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:26:00 AM
Your poetry is pure light today Regina, much enjoyed your words :)
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Date: 1/14/2024 4:11:00 AM
I have never written this form, but from your words, I guess it is about creating imagery? You have done this perfectly here, love the word choices to do that and it is so vivid, especially the beginning to it... love it.
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Date: 1/14/2024 3:33:00 AM
Oh dear beautiful Gina, this is truly one my most FAV poems from you.. Gosh, such heartfelt and evocative depths you've knitted here with soulful words, where despite the darkness of the past and laced with the agony of melancholy, her soul wishes for peace and a better tomorrow..Trying to embrace those opal shades which became a part of her journey.. Those ending lines really made me awestruck "More than just a passing memory,But an imprint on history", "She is alive, like the darkening past"
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Date: 1/14/2024 3:34:00 AM
Simply wowww.. This left me speechless.. What an exquisite wordsmithery you've presented here with a beautiful flow and moonlit elements.. Absolutely loved reading this, sending you light & many best wishes ~

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