One Winter's Night

I stood on the balcony one night,
The land was bathed in luminous light,
The air was filled with winter's chill,
Frost had covered the window sill.

I stared into the sky above,
My heart had swelled full of love,
The galaxy glowed with bright stars,
Lights so heavenly, from afar.

The night shone bright on every hill,
Yet, everything was quiet and still,
Through the valley no wind did blow,
The little village blanketed in snow.

What joy the Yule is going to bring,
At the break of dawn, the town will sing,
Making this, one eve to remember,
On one magical night of December.

But, in this fantasy land it is late,
And this seasonable panorama is great,
I want to take this long walk alone,
Through unchanging scenery, I wander from home.

I'll take a candle to light my way,
Upon the ice, I could walk until day,
I made it up a deep, glittering bank,
In the glistening snowflakes, my feet sank.

A million diamonds now covered the land,
I pulled my mittens on, over my hands,
The snow could never melt in this cold,
The Northern degrees of stories once told.

I will enjoy the winter as in days of old,
The still photographs of the past unfold,
A thermometer shows the drop of degrees,
The thaw of the snow I hope not to see.

Mirrored is my reflection along the river,
Quartz crystals of ice, makes me shiver,
Icicles hang from a cabin, near the woods,
Silently, wolves and elk in the forest, stood.

Reindeer and rabbits run through the snow,
A memorable sight in the lovely moon's glow,
An owl calls out from high in a tree,
Imagine all this, as a keepsake to see.

Tomorrow the snow will make the children sing,
To the hills, a toboggan they will bring,
Soon, we will hear his sleigh bells ring,
And, all the Christmas bells will be jingling!



Written by : Kelly Deschler
For Leonora Galinta's contest - Christmas Epic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Kelly Such a wonderfully written Christmas poem. The imagery and descriptions used takes me right into this amazing place full of peace, joy, and serenity. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Part Of Me poem and faving it. Hugs
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January 15, 2014 at 9:45 PM
KELLY, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
Deschler Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 11:33 PM
Thank you very much, SKAT! I appreciate you stopping by. Take care! :)
Jones Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 8:31 PM
This is totally awesome....congratulations on your win....
Deschler Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Thank you so much, Donna! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate you stopping by.
Onclaud Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:10 PM
joyful, joyful song, jelly.. sweet congrats!
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Nette! I appreciate you stopping by.
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:39 PM
fantastic pen Kelly brilliantly written congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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January 7, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Thank you so much, Shadow! That means a lot coming from you! I appreciate you stopping by.
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Lovely epic write about Christmas Season! fav line [ Tomorrow the snow will make the children sing,] good for two contests, way to go gal! Congrad's Light & Love
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Yes, I killed two birds with one stone, so to speak! Thank you so much for the kind congrats, Debbie! I really appreciate you stopping by.
Horsch Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 6:50 AM
A well written poem Kelly, Congrats on your win. I really enjoyed reading this one....Hugs....Roger
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Roger! I really appreciate you stopping by. Hugs!
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:59 AM
Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Kelly
Gasun Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 1:58 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dear friend, Kelly ! Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
Deschler Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Leonora! I really do appreciate it. And, I hope that 2014 is a terrific year for you!
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:03 PM
A beautiful scene it reminded me of paintings I have seen [can't remember the artist?] Congrad's on your win!
Deschler Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, and for the placement in your contest! I really appreciate the recognition, Debbie!
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December 12, 2013 at 6:04 AM
Lovely Kelly, many congratulations xx
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December 12, 2013 at 5:36 AM
wow, Kelly the poem is amazing ... I know you will do well in Leonora's contest as well. ..congrats. .Linda
Deschler Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! That means a lot coming from you! I hope Leonora will like this poem, as well!
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 11:19 PM
Congrats on the win, Kelly
Onclaud Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 1:54 PM
smooth, shining write that no matter how long this one is, i read it with much gusto.. sych poetic appeal here, kelly!... huggs
Melugin Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:28 PM
Kelly, you painted a beautiful winter scene with your brilliant pen, chuck
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 3:37 PM
Hi Kelly, thanks for your recent comment. If I can find a poem I have not seen of yours yet, I will leave another comment.
Sathasivam Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 12:34 AM
Excellent. Lovely poetry. Enjoyed reading it Tfs
Fraser Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 9:47 PM
This is the first of your work ive read, and believe me im going to read more, this triggered so many winter memories for me and made me smile. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Carl
Deschler Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 4:03 PM
Thank you very much, Carl! I am so glad that you enjoyed your first visit to my poems! I am looking forward to reading your work shortly!
Dunn Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Thank you for believeing my friend and for your wonderful comment it means alot to me. cheri
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December 6, 2013 at 2:59 PM
- Kelly, a wonderful poetry - Love it!! - Have a great weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. I hope that you have a great weekend, as well!
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December 6, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a wonderful winter wonderland..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Thank you for the kind visit, Sara! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem!
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December 6, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Good morning Kelly, some great comments on your poem.
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Good evening, Richard, thanks for stopping by. I am very surprised by the great comments my poem is receiving! To be honest, I was actually not too confident with this poem!
Tacito Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 7:53 AM
My heart filled with such exciting goosebumps as I read this. You captured this so, so well!
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Thank you so much, Drake! That means a lot coming from you!
Onclaud Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 6:55 AM
splendidly arranged to beguile the readers, kelly.. i am more beguiled by this heartfelt, beautiful write... wow.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, Nette! That means a lot coming from you! I am so glad that you enjoyed it!
Dunn Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Nice winter write enjoyed the read of this poem.cheri
Deschler Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, Cheryl! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. That means a lot coming from you!
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