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One Winter's Night

I stood on the balcony one night, The land was bathed in luminous light, The air was filled with winter's chill, Frost had covered the window sill. I stared into the sky above, My heart had swelled full of love, The galaxy glowed with bright stars, Lights so heavenly, from afar. The night shone bright on every hill, Yet, everything was quiet and still, Through the valley no wind did blow, The little village blanketed in snow. What joy the Yule is going to bring, At the break of dawn, the town will sing, Making this, one eve to remember, On one magical night of December. But, in this fantasy land it is late, And this seasonable panorama is great, I want to take this long walk alone, Through unchanging scenery, I wander from home. I'll take a candle to light my way, Upon the ice, I could walk until day, I made it up a deep, glittering bank, In the glistening snowflakes, my feet sank. A million diamonds now covered the land, I pulled my mittens on, over my hands, The snow could never melt in this cold, The Northern degrees of stories once told. I will enjoy the winter as in days of old, The still photographs of the past unfold, A thermometer shows the drop of degrees, The thaw of the snow I hope not to see. Mirrored is my reflection along the river, Quartz crystals of ice, makes me shiver, Icicles hang from a cabin, near the woods, Silently, wolves and elk in the forest, stood. Reindeer and rabbits run through the snow, A memorable sight in the lovely moon's glow, An owl calls out from high in a tree, Imagine all this, as a keepsake to see. Tomorrow the snow will make the children sing, To the hills, a toboggan they will bring, Soon, we will hear his sleigh bells ring, And, all the Christmas bells will be jingling! Written by : Kelly Deschler For Leonora Galinta's contest - Christmas Epic

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Date: 1/26/2014 9:39:00 AM
Kelly Such a wonderfully written Christmas poem. The imagery and descriptions used takes me right into this amazing place full of peace, joy, and serenity. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Part Of Me poem and faving it. Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:45:00 PM
KELLY, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/16/2014 11:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, SKAT! I appreciate you stopping by. Take care! :)
Date: 1/7/2014 8:31:00 PM
This is totally awesome....congratulations on your win....
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Date: 1/8/2014 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Donna! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/3/2014 3:10:00 PM
joyful, joyful song, jelly.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:32:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Nette! I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/3/2014 12:39:00 PM
fantastic pen Kelly brilliantly written congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Shadow! That means a lot coming from you! I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/3/2014 12:09:00 PM
Lovely epic write about Christmas Season! fav line [ Tomorrow the snow will make the children sing,] good for two contests, way to go gal! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:05:00 PM
Yes, I killed two birds with one stone, so to speak! Thank you so much for the kind congrats, Debbie! I really appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/3/2014 6:50:00 AM
A well written poem Kelly, Congrats on your win. I really enjoyed reading this one....Hugs....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 11:00:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Roger! I really appreciate you stopping by. Hugs!
Date: 1/3/2014 3:59:00 AM
Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Kelly
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Date: 1/3/2014 1:58:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dear friend, Kelly ! Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Leonora! I really do appreciate it. And, I hope that 2014 is a terrific year for you!
Date: 12/12/2013 7:03:00 PM
A beautiful scene it reminded me of paintings I have seen [can't remember the artist?] Congrad's on your win!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/13/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, and for the placement in your contest! I really appreciate the recognition, Debbie!
Date: 12/12/2013 6:04:00 AM
Lovely Kelly, many congratulations xx
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Date: 12/12/2013 5:36:00 AM
wow, Kelly the poem is amazing ... I know you will do well in Leonora's contest as well. ..congrats. .Linda
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! That means a lot coming from you! I hope Leonora will like this poem, as well!
Date: 12/11/2013 11:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Kelly
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Date: 12/9/2013 1:54:00 PM
smooth, shining write that no matter how long this one is, i read it with much gusto.. sych poetic appeal here, kelly!... huggs
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:28:00 PM
Kelly, you painted a beautiful winter scene with your brilliant pen, chuck
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Date: 12/8/2013 3:37:00 PM
Hi Kelly, thanks for your recent comment. If I can find a poem I have not seen of yours yet, I will leave another comment.
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Date: 12/8/2013 12:34:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poetry. Enjoyed reading it Tfs
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Date: 12/7/2013 9:47:00 PM
This is the first of your work ive read, and believe me im going to read more, this triggered so many winter memories for me and made me smile. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Carl
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/9/2013 4:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carl! I am so glad that you enjoyed your first visit to my poems! I am looking forward to reading your work shortly!
Date: 12/7/2013 6:36:00 PM
Thank you for believeing my friend and for your wonderful comment it means alot to me. cheri
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Date: 12/6/2013 2:59:00 PM
- Kelly, a wonderful poetry - Love it!! - Have a great weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 5:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. I hope that you have a great weekend, as well!
Date: 12/6/2013 11:31:00 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a wonderful winter wonderland..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 4:49:00 PM
Thank you for the kind visit, Sara! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 12/6/2013 9:16:00 AM
Good morning Kelly, some great comments on your poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 4:33:00 PM
Good evening, Richard, thanks for stopping by. I am very surprised by the great comments my poem is receiving! To be honest, I was actually not too confident with this poem!
Date: 12/6/2013 7:53:00 AM
My heart filled with such exciting goosebumps as I read this. You captured this so, so well!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Drake! That means a lot coming from you!
Date: 12/6/2013 6:55:00 AM
splendidly arranged to beguile the readers, kelly.. i am more beguiled by this heartfelt, beautiful write... wow.. huggs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, Nette! That means a lot coming from you! I am so glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/5/2013 6:32:00 PM
Nice winter write enjoyed the read of this poem.cheri
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/6/2013 5:05:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl! I am glad that you enjoyed my poem. That means a lot coming from you!
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