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One Who Likes Honey

one who likes honey
sweetness whispered
   whiff of wetness
portent of shadows
                     sleeping
        off the cold
    tundra
to utter…to utter
                   insane
   barely brave
bravado covers
     the lay
of miles and miles
stickiness roars
 from his lips
don’t be insane
   his name
an apparition
    waiting
      to wake up
your nightmares
  the intent
of silhouette
     moving across
your tent’s face
               chiaroscuro
      drawn onto
your forehead, eyelids,
  cheeks, nose, chin
   distorting the thrill
    you felt at dusk
this polar beast
 might employ
your safety net
as a handkerchief
   then nibble
a late night snack

(hand over mouth)
     “b     e     a     r”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 5:30 AM
stunning poem, i would say too, congrats for your win, a talented poetry anytime have a nice week end poet
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 1:10 AM
Not a welcome teddy bear that is for certain!
Poet Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Hearty congratulations on your wonderful contest win with this stunning poem, dear Kim.
Guptar Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations friend for your win in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem which keeps the breath until the last line. Wish you a pleasant day
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 10:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your "One Who Likes Honey" write. Great Ending... I love honey and bears. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 2:17 AM
Darn bears! Do they never get diabetes? I love honey but must desist.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 5:26 AM
LOL! Hugs
Mendoza Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Hello Kim I like your style I think I'll do one poem like yours one of these days. I'm just doing the sharing about God, you might want to read some, it's good for u. Thanks... Jacqueline
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 6:18 PM
I will, Jacqueline! Thank you!
Hind Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 4:10 PM
An irony, isn't it? I wonder why bears are associated with gentleness though...little kids have teddy bears and love and trust their sleep to them. <3 happy reading, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 6:11 PM
Thank you, Paige <3
Hind Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 5:05 PM
I keep reading this! It's in my fav- how you did this one, I don't know. <3 hugs
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