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One Who Likes Honey

one who likes honey sweetness whispered whiff of wetness portent of shadows sleeping off the cold tundra to utter…to utter insane barely brave bravado covers the lay of miles and miles stickiness roars from his lips don’t be insane his name an apparition waiting to wake up your nightmares the intent of silhouette moving across your tent’s face chiaroscuro drawn onto your forehead, eyelids, cheeks, nose, chin distorting the thrill you felt at dusk this polar beast might employ your safety net as a handkerchief then nibble a late night snack (hand over mouth) “b e a r”

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Date: 5/23/2025 5:30:00 AM
stunning poem, i would say too, congrats for your win, a talented poetry anytime have a nice week end poet
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Date: 5/23/2025 1:10:00 AM
Not a welcome teddy bear that is for certain!
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Date: 5/22/2025 12:35:00 PM
Hearty congratulations on your wonderful contest win with this stunning poem, dear Kim.
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Date: 5/22/2025 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations friend for your win in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem which keeps the breath until the last line. Wish you a pleasant day
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Date: 5/22/2025 10:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "One Who Likes Honey" write. Great Ending... I love honey and bears. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 5/22/2025 2:17:00 AM
Darn bears! Do they never get diabetes? I love honey but must desist.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2025 5:26:00 AM
LOL! Hugs
Date: 5/21/2025 6:14:00 PM
Hello Kim I like your style I think I'll do one poem like yours one of these days. I'm just doing the sharing about God, you might want to read some, it's good for u. Thanks... Jacqueline
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2025 6:18:00 PM
I will, Jacqueline! Thank you!
Date: 5/21/2025 4:10:00 PM
An irony, isn't it? I wonder why bears are associated with gentleness though...little kids have teddy bears and love and trust their sleep to them. <3 happy reading, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/21/2025 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Paige <3
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/21/2025 5:05:00 PM
I keep reading this! It's in my fav- how you did this one, I don't know. <3 hugs

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