One White Cloud

One
White cloud	
Drifting high
In a blue sky	
Blowing, distant winds
The sun above the earth
Below with fields of grain
Waving slow in a gentle breeze
The sun shines down on the golden sea 
The sky empty except for one white cloud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 8:40 PM
beautiful poem for this cool form! Robert! jim
Ashley-Garn Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 5:51 PM
this poem is filled with images and peace... keep writing cause it will take you far... Ciara =)
Yates Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 3:32 PM
Beautiful imagery... Sounds very peaceful. Great write!
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June 28, 2009 at 4:14 PM
Interesting images for an uplifting view. Nice use of this challenging form. Keep on writing and sharing your talent with us. Have a good day. Karen
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 4:07 PM
You make such sensitive observations of nature, Robert. This image is very vividly and beautifully conveyed! Love, Carolyn
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