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One Way Street In My Heart

Feeling a wee bit meloncoly, I must say I alowed my mind to travel on avenues that have been closed for repair for ages Some have had dead end signs placed others have had the same bumpy ride as it did when it was first traveled As many times as I have visited this old very broken down street, why do I keep comming back? Maybe as I approach the dead end, I am looking for which Detour sign I missed the first time None the less, the path that takes me there, will always remain the one way street in my heart..........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/19/2008 10:10:00 PM
interesting poem.....keep up the good work-very insightful and I like the allegory of the path....hope that makes sense. :)
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Date: 11/9/2008 10:31:00 AM
I like the way you use physical streets to take us on a journey of your life. Nice closing. You may want to change Detor to Detour. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/7/2008 11:08:00 PM
This is great Bonnie associting the street with a search or path of your life maybe a relationship kissing all the frogs trying to find that prince. Michael Torres
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