One Way Or the Other

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exactly how I see from my mortal coil 

When a person promotes abortion
telling nothing but lies surely that in itself is a direct product of hate speech 
The cloak and dagger of pity 
reality has many masks behind a veil of masked deception
hiding dark secrets, those afraid to be revealed transparency 
attacking honesty as having little value or purity 
When this awakening happens some poor souls are lost 
beyond saving trapped by the deceiver preaching untruths and misery 
Incapable of loving forgiveness 
instead they become a troublesome bully 
guilty condemning everything right 
in favour of what is wrong with society today
The great depression has consumed many hearts unlawfully
with warlike views it is here we see criminals attacking 
the virtues of life and death the very cornerstone of faith
There is no middle ground to be examined in this subject at hand 
your either one way or the other, according to the Word of God
I am a sinner forgive me my shortfalls
because in the end we all wish to go to the promised land
some things need to be said because the weeds of fascism is growing, smothering the innocent from speaking forthwith
the state has formed a new church teaching children to be poor within spirit

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Date: 1/20/2020 4:04:00 AM
Liam, I have just read your well written piece. This is the first time I have taken the opportunity to do so. Without Christ as the Cornerstone, all would be lost. Thank you for such a well thought out rendering.
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Date: 1/12/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Very Powerful n' true poem you've written ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)I agree with you!We're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted,sad times Liam!But with our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/20/2020 4:07:00 AM
Dorian, pardon this intrusion but, I read with great interest, your comments to Liam's great write. You warmed my heart with your comments and your strong evidence of faith in our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. Bless you for the faith you are not ashamed to openly share! Curtis Moorman
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