One Two Three

ONE TWO THREE
    
                     one two three in queue 
                    emotion love and passion
                      to entwine in mind.
    
            When first love charms, enchants, whelms,
             emotion surges, passion flames.                     

   02/27/19
               Fifth Place
     'Charliekucoup' Contest by charles messina.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Anisha , :) . ... Hugs Eve ~`*
Dutta Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Thanks n Regards
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 4:34 AM
- Congratulations on your win :) -
Dutta Avatar
March 7, 2019 at 5:36 AM
Thanks
May Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Congrats on your win Anisha..
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Thank Joseph. Best Wishes
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 3:18 PM
I see you only forgot something to do or this would have placed higher I bet. congrats on the winners' list, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 10:43 PM
I 'll check
Messina Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Anisha, Anisha, Anisha...lol You needed to have two lines in your couplet and they needed to rhyme as well. Nonetheless it was a very nice poem. Congratulations on your placement...Charlie
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