One Too Many

my head spinning
a glass empty...then full
one drink too many
laughter comes freely
as Jack loosens the tongue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Hillmer Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:06 PM
This all good, as long as you; KNOW WHO YOUR FRINDS ARE!!! LOL
Culverhouse Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:09 AM
oh no...not again?? hehe behave or you'll just get sick....
Poet Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Very nice Charles.Enjoyed the humour.
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 4:27 AM
:) funny one Charles. Yes,one too many. -oxox love Anne-Lise
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