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One Tiny Flaw

One Tiny Flaw By Elton Camp Roger met the woman of his dreams He used the best online service it seems She was beautiful & extremely charming And had a manner that he found disarming They happily made arrangements to meet He expected to fall in worship at her feet When they met at a very nice little cafe Roger saw she was what she did say She said, "Hello Roger, I am Char. So glad we met, tell me how you are." They sat and talked for over an hour Roger fell completely into her power "Why not come to my place," she said As she winked and nodded her head Roger liked everything that he saw Until he discovered one little flaw One that he could never come to stand It turned out that Char was really a man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/7/2012 5:05:00 PM
i was trying to anticipate what the ending was going to be, but you've done a great job of leading up to something unexpected. very funny!
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Elton Camp
Date: 3/7/2012 5:37:00 PM
Thanks. I love those little surprise endings and use them often. Elton
Date: 3/7/2012 8:39:00 AM
thats humorous, goog one!
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Elton Camp
Date: 3/7/2012 8:43:00 AM
Hey Joel, I got the idea from an experience related to me by a guy who read my poem about the dangers of chat rooms. I often get ideas from readers that lead to a poem. Thanks for reading. Elton

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