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They were once together They asked They wondered They laughed They taught They loved She was seed He was water She was bulb He was electricity The cold day one day decided To separate them away A heartless prove they both Had to take And in the end They were never Each others grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2013 11:18:00 AM
Ricardo, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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