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One Thirty Six

` I’ll start with one The easiest way To compose a poem This wonderful day Not much at counting Math’s not for me Algebra, Calculus Geometry Too many numbers Written in pen Add this, subtract that Then do it again Now I am closer Checking the sum Maybe mistaken I’m kind of dumb But I keep writing Following rules Using my phrases Poetic tools Spilling my verses Out on the page Regardless of meaning No matter the age Hoping to finish Here before long Asking the counter Please don’t be wrong Seeing an ending Come into sight Thankful it’s nearing So hard to write My eyes are blurry Fingers they ache Just one more stanza Is all it will take And if it doesn’t Then I’ll have to fix To get this poem To one thirty six Written for: One Hundred and Thirty Six Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Lawless

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Date: 8/22/2019 10:48:00 PM
Amazing job Chris! I see a win in your future!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/23/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne.
Date: 8/21/2019 8:30:00 PM
Ha, ha! Such an enjoyable romp. Great entry for the contest, Chris! Best wishes always, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 8/23/2019 7:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 8/21/2019 1:14:00 PM
This is SO clever and creative, Chris. I LOVE it. Janice
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Chris Green
Date: 8/21/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much Janice. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 8/21/2019 12:44:00 PM
i love this, so charmed by your hundred and more words which i need not count, chris...huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/21/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Nette for your nice comment
Date: 8/20/2019 8:59:00 PM
Hey Chris nice to see you posting, this is a fun one, you must have enjoyed playing with this one! Hope you're back for a while...you are missed!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/21/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much John. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 8/20/2019 7:55:00 PM
What a clever poem for the contest! This is delightful! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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Chris Green
Date: 8/21/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 8/20/2019 4:58:00 PM
oh, what fun, chris! i can tell how much you enjoyed writing it, but not as much as your readers will experience reading it!
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2019 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I appreciate all of the kindness you have always shown me.
Date: 8/20/2019 2:39:00 PM
What a fun poem! I can feel the plodding forward in this and sure can relate to math not being for me :)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. This was actually fun to write but difficult to get to the exact word count.
Date: 8/20/2019 2:00:00 PM
This just barrels along Chris, great writing. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary. I am glad you enjoyed this.
Date: 8/20/2019 1:17:00 PM
"My eyes are blurry" Mine too, calculating math with you. :) But, what a fun way to let numbers fall. Upon the page while creating poetry. Your thoughts bring a smile. Welcome Back Chris. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2019 1:30:00 PM
Hey there Brandy, thanks so much. I knew I could "count" on you. : ) I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 8/20/2019 12:01:00 PM
what a clever write for the subject, it had such great flow and perfect wording to carry the reader through...love it, good luck in the contest~ Great write~ :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 8/20/2019 1:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Just having a little fun with the contest theme.

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