One Tenth of a Father

I am a patient son
Yet I abhor waiting for the version of you that I love 
Every time you touch a bottle, 
You violently divorce me as your son 
Each time you become a different man, one I cannot love 
Oh father, I detest all your shades but one. 
Abandon your poison, 
Or very soon I will love none
Be the man you hope I'll become.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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June 20, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Sorry for the bad father... many will relate.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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June 10, 2026 at 10:23 PM
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June 10, 2026 at 10:27 PM
Good day Ryan Such poignant words "every time you touch the bottle you divorce me as your son" Powerful Blessings Douglas
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June 7, 2026 at 9:13 AM
Ryan, thanks for your entry. It was well-crafted. It touched me deeply. Congratulations on your 1st place!
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