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ONE STONE skipped by bonnie brook he’s showing off his perfect skill she hardly breathes standing still her eyes slaphappy-splash he handles the one stone turns over and fondles he’s cocky and controlled her cheeks are piqued green-eyed moss at her feet she shuts her eyes and sighs, and she personifies the prized stone feels his breath on her polished skin his fingers on her every inch the careening off the cliff from his fingertips as her heart skips headlong, in his wistful path still feeling the flicking of his wrist, the snap of his formidable frenzy voracious vortex she’s out of breath and she embraces every minute bouncing along the bonnie bonnie brook 11/7/2017 Two Word Challenge Contest Sponsored by John Lawless

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Date: 11/19/2017 7:44:00 PM
Excellent imagery in your words and a nice visual presentation, Kim. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 9:06:00 PM
Hugs..Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 11/17/2017 8:09:00 AM
Like your creative take on the contest prompt, Kim. Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Agnes!
Date: 11/16/2017 8:29:00 AM
Back with congratulations! xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Maureen xx
Date: 11/15/2017 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2017 3:12:00 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Date: 11/15/2017 7:10:00 PM
A very sensual piece you've written Kim, if the intent is as I perceive it, and the lovely stream flows in your layout.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2017 8:17:00 PM
Thank you James!
Date: 11/15/2017 6:33:00 PM
Kim, a very interesting twist on the personification of the stone and the sensuality it embodied. Thanks for entering the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2017 8:21:00 PM
Thank you so much John!
Date: 11/8/2017 8:43:00 PM
Excellent imigary, Kim . Luck in the contest hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 8:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve xx
Date: 11/7/2017 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful imagery throughout this romantic trek, Kim. Such a fabulous poem. Great lines ... feels his breath on her polished skin ... the careening off the cliff ... as her heart skips. Just gorgeous poetic tapestry. You're so good, and what you give us readers is so good to get. Wonderful poem to open the eyes with. Love and joy always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2017 9:20:00 AM
That means so much coming from you Freddie! <3 Kim
Date: 11/7/2017 8:36:00 AM
This is fantastic Kim :) it skips! Love it! My best to you in the contest xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!

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