One Stone

ONE STONE

skipped by bonnie brook
      he’s showing off
           his perfect skill

               she hardly breathes
          standing still
her eyes slaphappy-splash

he handles the one stone
              turns over and fondles
                   he’s cocky and controlled

                             her cheeks are piqued
               green-eyed moss at her feet
she shuts her eyes and sighs, and

she personifies the prized stone
       feels his breath on her polished skin
                        his fingers on her every inch

the careening off the cliff
                    from his fingertips
                            as her heart skips

                      headlong, in his wistful path
         still feeling the flicking
of his wrist, the snap

of his formidable frenzy
                  voracious vortex
                            she’s out of breath

                             and she embraces every minute
                       bouncing along
the bonnie bonnie brook

11/7/2017
Two Word Challenge Contest 
Sponsored by John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Excellent imagery in your words and a nice visual presentation, Kim. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 9:06 PM
Hugs..Thank you, Sandra!
Krampe Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Like your creative take on the contest prompt, Kim. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Agnes!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Back with congratulations! xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Maureen xx
Barden Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Thanks, Greg!
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:10 PM
A very sensual piece you've written Kim, if the intent is as I perceive it, and the lovely stream flows in your layout.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Thank you James!
Lawless Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Kim, a very interesting twist on the personification of the stone and the sensuality it embodied. Thanks for entering the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Thank you so much John!
Roper Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Excellent imigary, Kim . Luck in the contest hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:44 PM
Thanks so much Eve xx
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Beautiful imagery throughout this romantic trek, Kim. Such a fabulous poem. Great lines ... feels his breath on her polished skin ... the careening off the cliff ... as her heart skips. Just gorgeous poetic tapestry. You're so good, and what you give us readers is so good to get. Wonderful poem to open the eyes with. Love and joy always.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:20 AM
That means so much coming from you Freddie! <3 Kim
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 8:36 AM
This is fantastic Kim :) it skips! Love it! My best to you in the contest xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
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