Hello There Poet Rhyme

One Stitch Begins the Mend

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The power of one stitch
some may not comprehend;
though the garment is not fixed,
it is still a worthy mend.

Pull back to center of the gaping hole
what’s frayed, fragmented, torn;
one solid suture can bring new life
and fabric be reborn.

And though it seems imperfect,
it creates the perfect start to 
restore what seems beyond repair,
like the shattering of hearts.

I am grateful for this golden thread; 
it proves easier to cope.
In the center of my core, 
one single stitch now offers hope.

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Sandra Adams September 9, 2019 at 5:19 PM nicely penned...I have too used sewing, threads in a metaphorical write, it makes the poem powerful...enjoyed the read! Hello There September 9, 2019 at 8:00 PM Thank you so much ~ I look forward to reading yours :)

Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2019 at 7:06 AM I wrote a piece titled Broken People that you might appreciate. If you type in the title into the search bar at the top of this page, you should be able to find it. Blessings Richard. Hello There September 6, 2019 at 6:24 PM Thank you ~ I'm on it ;)

Anne E Sangster - K September 6, 2019 at 12:01 AM Beautiful :-) Hello There September 6, 2019 at 6:23 PM Thank you <3

Pat Adams September 5, 2019 at 11:27 PM All is not lost, when it can be mended. I like the whole poem, but the very last line is the hook, for me. One single stitch now offers hope. You have a real flair for rhyme, which I admire. Well done!.........80) Hello There September 6, 2019 at 6:23 PM That means alot coming from you, pat ~ you know I adore your rhyming pieces ;) And, thank you, sometimes people don't realize it's often worth the while, I think.

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2019 at 9:09 AM Sadly clothing and people are often discarded far too soon. I like this piece, it causes one to ponder. Hello There September 5, 2019 at 10:14 AM Sadly, yes. Knowing you understand has brought a few tears. Thank you for stopping by.

Elizabeth Kinch September 5, 2019 at 3:35 AM How eloquently written. I feel I have a few golden stitches within. Hello There September 5, 2019 at 10:10 AM Thank you, Elizabeth. I'm glad you do <3

Mystic Rose Rose September 4, 2019 at 11:12 PM A very deep write , at the center core lies that golden stitch, lovely expressions dear poet Hello There September 5, 2019 at 10:09 AM Thank you, Pixie Dust ~

Chris Green September 4, 2019 at 2:24 PM I can think of a few times I could have used a thread like that. Loved this, your poems always flow so smoothly and create such an amazing vision. And this is so true, everything mostly, can be mended, maybe they aren't as good as new when that happens but they certainly have plenty of useful life left. Hello There September 4, 2019 at 6:29 PM Me, too, Chris... Thank you for your kind and generous feedback ~ and taking the time to show you understand. So very appreciative...