One Step Backwards

To hear that you are gone for good
and never coming back to me,
it breaks my heart and tears my soul;
I wonder why this has to be.

You say you're happy now with him;
I have to back away, I know,
and leave you to enjoy that love,
forget the way I hoped we'd grow.

You left three years ago and I
must carry on...at least, I'll try.

written 5th August for Constance's Poetry Journal contest

One step backwards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/19/2018 1:25:00 PM
Big congrats for your win, Jack,
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/9/2018 2:56:00 PM
Jack congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write ~
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:19:00 AM
Jack i feel your pain, this is wonderfully written and one gem of a poem..
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Date: 8/6/2018 5:42:00 PM
sometimes, we don't have to let go of love as memories stay almost forever... such a splendid write, jack!...huggs
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Date: 8/6/2018 3:02:00 PM
Some never get over a lost love...they remain unmarried as my grandfather did after losing my grandmother. They were kept apart by family and she died young at 50. This is a fine entry for the contest Jack! ;-)
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Date: 8/5/2018 2:25:00 PM
Well, one can writer a better poem when they have or are experiencing the event or pain. Good job. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 8/5/2018 2:11:00 PM
Hi, Jack, you did a beautiful job here though I think you used poetic license. There is still a ring of truth in it. The sting of the breakup. Thanks for visiting my poems today. I need desperately to get over to my emails. Hopefully soon!
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