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I feel your pain, and yet I'm unable to rescue you from yourself, and I know in my heart I never will. Looking into your eyes, I see both doubt and love, wondering why I care. I found a boy locked in a man's body, and my heart ached! You were friendless, helpless, and hopeless; how could I not care! My heart instantly made room for you and welcomed you in. Something beautiful happened the day you found a father; I found a son! You lied, you stole, and you connived, but I wouldn't let go, and neither would you! I'm all you have, and I want to make a difference in your life. Separate we're weak, missing a piece of ourselves, but together we're strong, supporting each other with our love. My presence will continue to touch your life, unto death. I hope we meet again in paradise and greet each other, one soul to another, my son! (Free Verse) 3/12/2018

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Date: 3/25/2018 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations. An thought provoking and interesting take on the theme. I like this poem, Kai
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Kai, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/24/2018 11:18:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/24/2018 8:34:00 PM
Goodness! What a touching, beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Very touching. You have a great heart!
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Date: 3/25/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 5:08:00 PM
Congrats! your winning poem shows how In recognizing the need in others, God can fills the deepest need in ourselves. Most people do not discuss Paradise ( only heaven) why did you??? I share this hope for one become type of second son to me.Very touching. bbn
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Date: 3/23/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, heaven is too religious for my beliefs while Paradise leans more towards spirituality than the thought of spending eternity in worship, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 3:57:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 3:38:00 PM
Everyone needs a friend like you Emile, so many wonderful lines of support.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you my friend, you honor me, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 1:58:00 PM
- A strong poem with strong feelings, Emile - Gives me tears ... - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 1:57:00 PM
Wow - a powerful poem of compassion and legacy. I love it, Emile. An awesome write.
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your loyal support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:45:00 AM
The incredible power of family, through light & dark. To be valued...
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Drake, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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