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One Soul To Another

I feel your pain, and yet I'm unable to rescue you from yourself, and I know in my heart I never will. Looking into your eyes, I see both doubt and love, wondering why I care. I found a boy locked in a man's body, and my heart ached! You were friendless, helpless, and hopeless; how could I not care! My heart instantly made room for you and welcomed you in. Something beautiful happened the day you found a father; I found a son! You lied, you stole, and you connived, but I wouldn't let go, and neither would you! I'm all you have, and I want to make a difference in your life. Separate we're weak, missing a piece of ourselves, but together we're strong, supporting each other with our love. My presence will continue to touch your life, unto death. I hope we meet again in paradise and greet each other, one soul to another, my son! (Free Verse) 3/12/2018
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Neumann Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations. An thought provoking and interesting take on the theme. I like this poem, Kai
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Kai, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Goodness! What a touching, beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Very touching. You have a great heart!
Pinet Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Congrats! your winning poem shows how In recognizing the need in others, God can fills the deepest need in ourselves. Most people do not discuss Paradise ( only heaven) why did you??? I share this hope for one become type of second son to me.Very touching. bbn
Pinet Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thanks Barbara, heaven is too religious for my beliefs while Paradise leans more towards spirituality than the thought of spending eternity in worship, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:57 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Everyone needs a friend like you Emile, so many wonderful lines of support.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
Pinet Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Thank you my friend, you honor me, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:58 PM
- A strong poem with strong feelings, Emile - Gives me tears ... - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Wow - a powerful poem of compassion and legacy. I love it, Emile. An awesome write.
Pinet Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:43 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your loyal support my friend, Emile.
Tacito Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 10:45 AM
The incredible power of family, through light & dark. To be valued...
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Drake, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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