One Small Step For Man. One Giant Leap........

She sits at the front Rosa Parks making a stand Rebel - for mankind
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January 1, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Amen! What a wonderful message in this poem. Powerful poem--and in just three lines. Keep up the good writing. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Karen
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September 20, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Hey I member u tellin me bout this one really cool love it she stood up 4 wat was right!!!.....<3 Cilla Jaye
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September 20, 2009 at 7:42 AM
God Bless her courage!! ....
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September 19, 2009 at 4:16 PM
Just read all the comments...Nice view of her efforts!!!
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September 18, 2009 at 5:02 PM
all the world know Rosa Parks-the woman,the rebel for mankind,a rebel for freedom..women like Rosa are called Women with a capital W.....EXCELLENT TRIBUTE--Charma
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September 17, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Brilliant piece Abe, this is the kind of work that makes your poems highly readable, and even this Highlander has heard of Rosa Louise McCauley Parks, born in Tuskegee - where a superb squadron of airmen came from also. Well deserved Senyru>>James
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September 17, 2009 at 6:19 AM
She was strong and brave. This is an excellent tribute to her offering to man. Respect- (I have a movie about her life that I watch from time to time... usually in Feb.) Excellent senryu, Abe. With love, Dane
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September 16, 2009 at 6:59 AM
nice work, the ultimate rebel
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September 16, 2009 at 6:46 AM
nice poem...i need advice about how to write...and i dont have soup mail..im not a premium member...or i havent figure out how to use it...lol.
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September 16, 2009 at 3:09 AM
A thought-provoking write...thank you for sharing.. Always, Farah
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September 15, 2009 at 5:50 PM
yes! fine tribute! Abe!...and thanks for your welcome comments!...jim
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September 15, 2009 at 4:39 PM
You're Shooting Truth Arrows... my friend... right on target... Loved It... 3 Lines 13 Words... Uncounted - Visual aids MoonBee
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September 15, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Excellent senryu, she made a difference...Raul
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September 15, 2009 at 10:22 AM
a senryu to ponder and think-well penned Abe--Charma
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September 15, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Excellent!! Thank you Abe for your good wishes on my entry in Brian's contest, and for writing such a strong poem as this!
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