One Sided Love

she makes my heart quiver
she understands me more
at the mention of her name my body did shiver
but my feelings is developing into a deep sore

she wants me not,i'm not her type
she's far richer and cute
i use facebook,she uses skype
at the sight of her,i become mute

i told her how i felt
she laughed and discarded it as a joke
i hope that she would soon melt
even if i'm rich or broke

this piece i write from my heart
with the hope and humility of a dove
and i pray we would come together never to depart
and put an end to this one sided love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Adetoro Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:25 AM
the imbalance in love is pretty amazing. David, somehow i pray the one sided love would never end so you can keep penning lovely thoughts like this
Teminijesu Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:42 AM
lol...bussy...its no fun at all...its better to imagine than to experience...or u may decide to fall in love with me first ...lol...thanks a lot
Teminijesu Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 9:08 AM
I blocked commenting for a while by mistake...i'm sorry...this poem was a fiction...i appreciate y'all
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:51 AM
I agree with Tim's comment - move on and find someone worthy of your love:-) hugs Jan x
Teminijesu Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 9:06 AM
thanks jan...*hugs*
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:32 AM
I hate to say it but move on my friend...there are plenty of women who will love you for what you are not what you appear to be...love is a two way street...and who knows if you are not around she might realize you are the one she loves....cheers
Teminijesu Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:35 AM
thanks...it touched my hrt
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