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one sided love

she makes my heart quiver she understands me more at the mention of her name my body did shiver but my feelings is developing into a deep sore she wants me not,i'm not her type she's far richer and cute i use facebook,she uses skype at the sight of her,i become mute i told her how i felt she laughed and discarded it as a joke i hope that she would soon melt even if i'm rich or broke this piece i write from my heart with the hope and humility of a dove and i pray we would come together never to depart and put an end to this one sided love

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Date: 11/11/2014 5:25:00 AM
the imbalance in love is pretty amazing. David, somehow i pray the one sided love would never end so you can keep penning lovely thoughts like this
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David Teminijesu
Date: 11/11/2014 8:42:00 AM
lol...bussy...its no fun at all...its better to imagine than to experience...or u may decide to fall in love with me first ...lol...thanks a lot
Date: 11/9/2014 9:08:00 AM
I blocked commenting for a while by mistake...i'm sorry...this poem was a fiction...i appreciate y'all
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Date: 11/9/2014 8:51:00 AM
I agree with Tim's comment - move on and find someone worthy of your love:-) hugs Jan x
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David Teminijesu
Date: 11/9/2014 9:06:00 AM
thanks jan...*hugs*
Date: 11/9/2014 8:32:00 AM
I hate to say it but move on my friend...there are plenty of women who will love you for what you are not what you appear to be...love is a two way street...and who knows if you are not around she might realize you are the one she loves....cheers
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David Teminijesu
Date: 11/9/2014 8:35:00 AM
thanks...it touched my hrt