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One Serene Morning

The sun arched up
Breaking over the horizon
As he leisurely awoke
How unusual it was
Her laying by his side
Serene and peaceful
Beautiful as she was
He reached over and
Kissed the corner of her lips
The way he’d done
A million times before
This one time would be
So differently surreal
His soul understanding
Instantly unfettered
His mind impervious
Seized in a chokehold
She had died calmly in her sleep
Recalled by her Maker
Harmony coming over him
As he wrapped his arms
Around his sweetheart
Her lifeless body
His lips still locked in place
Refusing to let go
The tears not coming
A visceral farewell
Just like that
In a flash
She had gone
The shell of her body left behind
A chrysalid
She, the butterfly



Submitted on December 22, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 8 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Date: 12/25/2019 1:08:00 PM
Such beauty in poetry! Love, death, tears and farewell! Marvellous!
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Date: 12/25/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Krish. Namaste.
Date: 12/25/2019 3:39:00 AM
This would be a top win in many contests my friend. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:29:00 PM
Wow! This is the top of the top! Bullseye! A FAVe. :) Gershon
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Gershon.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:31:00 AM
Line amazing! Congrats on a top win!;)
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/22/2019 1:16:00 PM
Hi Lin. I enjoyed this one. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

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