One Serene Morning

The sun arched up
Breaking over the horizon
As he leisurely awoke

How unusual it was
Her laying by his side
Serene and peaceful

Beautiful as she was
He reached over and
Kissed the corner of her lips

The way he’d done
A million times before
This one time would be
So differently surreal

His soul understanding
Instantly unfettered
His mind impervious
Seized in a chokehold

She had died calmly in her sleep
Recalled by her Maker
Harmony coming over him
As he wrapped his arms
Around his sweetheart

Her lifeless body
His lips still locked in place
Refusing to let go

The tears not coming
A visceral farewell
Just like that

In a flash
She had gone
The shell of her body left behind

A chrysalid
She, the butterfly



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on December 22, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 8 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Radhakrishna Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Such beauty in poetry! Love, death, tears and farewell! Marvellous!
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:05 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Krish. Namaste.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:39 AM
This would be a top win in many contests my friend. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 9:29 PM
Wow! This is the top of the top! Bullseye! A FAVe. :) Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Gershon.
Chiri Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Line amazing! Congrats on a top win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda. Most appreciated.
Na Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Hi Lin. I enjoyed this one. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
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