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One Serene Morning

The sun arched up Breaking over the horizon As he leisurely awoke How unusual it was Her laying by his side Serene and peaceful Beautiful as she was He reached over and Kissed the corner of her lips The way he’d done A million times before This one time would be So differently surreal His soul understanding Instantly unfettered His mind impervious Seized in a chokehold She had died calmly in her sleep Recalled by her Maker Harmony coming over him As he wrapped his arms Around his sweetheart Her lifeless body His lips still locked in place Refusing to let go The tears not coming A visceral farewell Just like that In a flash She had gone The shell of her body left behind A chrysalid She, the butterfly Submitted on December 22, 2019 for contest STRAND SPECIAL 8 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 12/25/2019 1:08:00 PM
Such beauty in poetry! Love, death, tears and farewell! Marvellous!
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Date: 12/25/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Krish. Namaste.
Date: 12/25/2019 3:39:00 AM
This would be a top win in many contests my friend. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:29:00 PM
Wow! This is the top of the top! Bullseye! A FAVe. :) Gershon
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and most appreciated compliment, Gershon.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:31:00 AM
Line amazing! Congrats on a top win!;)
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/22/2019 1:16:00 PM
Hi Lin. I enjoyed this one. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

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