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One Precious Pebble

One precious pebble on the ocean rolling away from the sea only the wind is causing commotion on the shore, where the shells breathe free

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Date: 2/7/2022 1:40:00 PM
'Where the shells breathe free' - so lyrical and moving, that is how I feel when I walk the beach -
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Date: 2/7/2022 12:09:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, That wind moves anything along its path. Hugs.
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Date: 2/7/2022 10:23:00 AM
That pebble was made precious by the rough sea and sand smoothing its edges . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 2/7/2022 8:27:00 AM
Nice, Mystic Rose Rose. You've captured that scene so well.
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Date: 2/7/2022 5:08:00 AM
Lovely poem. A moment well captured.
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