One Precious Pebble

One precious pebble on the ocean rolling away from the sea only the wind is causing commotion on the shore, where the shells breathe free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Faulkner Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 1:40 PM
'Where the shells breathe free' - so lyrical and moving, that is how I feel when I walk the beach -
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, That wind moves anything along its path. Hugs.
Leffanta Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 10:23 AM
That pebble was made precious by the rough sea and sand smoothing its edges . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Nice, Mystic Rose Rose. You've captured that scene so well.
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Lovely poem. A moment well captured.
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